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In a fantastical world of swords and magic Riki will be summoned only to forsake humanity that has been lost in its own vanity and pride to adventure all over the world in search of powerful opponents to bring excitement to his life.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------my first attempt at writing a story so i dont really have much idea what im doing. I would appreciate any criticism no matter how harsh and i will try to write chapters so long as i dont get bored of it.Edit: due to the reasoning in the "i appear to have messed up" post i will be putting this fiction aside for the moment while i try and redo it better so there will be no more updates till i return sometime soon hopefully. Statistics Overall Score .star-7647-overall-53d56addba7148b689f0751f7cbc5bb7:after{ width: 95.5825% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 2,569 Average Views : 856 Followers : 12 Favorites : 4 Ratings : 2 Pages : 12 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author kill me